I’m currently working on a
piece about a woman named Laura. Attempting to shut the door on the absence of
her husband Fred, and the ever-present circumstances of his departure, Laura
moves into an apartment with her daughter Wren. Laura vaguely senses a certain
familiarity stirring within her daughter. Caught between obsessing over Wren’s
upbringing, the growing claustrophobia of being sandwiched between the hidden
lives of apartment tenants, and a man who appears from
the fringes of the
property, Laura struggles to bring stability to their lives.
Believe it or not, I’ve
been good about setting aside an hour or so after work to tinker away at
Laura’s story. So I don’t jinx the flow, I’m going to keep Laura on my laptop
and typewriter for now
(Weird – right after I typed that sentence, I opened a
Magic Hat and the message on the bottle cap was “Get Jinxed”).
Despite the suggestion of
my beer, I’m going to travel back to the 5th grade. My mom recently
moved, and in helping her go through piles of boxes, I re-discovered lots of
crazy stuff. Including a typed (as in typewriter) copy of the anthology that the Enrichment program associated with my school put
together. Sitting there at the bottom of page 15 was this little ditty of a
poem I wrote about my home state:
Maine
Black-capped chickadees
chirp
in evergreen branches of
pine,
Golden potatoes grow
in blueberry-scented air,
Children play in salty
Atlantic breakers
Maine,
sparkling in the sun
As beautiful as
a gem
Fiona Clifford
Grade 5
OK – so the title is a
little uninspired (coming up with titles has never been my strong point), and
the last four lines are pretty cheesy, but I like “black-capped chickadees.”
As the search through
musty boxes continued, I found a laminated booklet of poems that I wrote and
illustrated when I was 12 (The “About the Author” section I wrote on blue-lined
notebook paper and pasted in the back clued me into how old I was). I’m not
sure if this was part of a school assignment, or something I did just for the
heck of it. But lo and behold, the third poem from the end was my Maine poem.
Even back then I liked to recycle my work!
Clearly Laura, Wren, and (absent) Fred have a lot going on beneath the surface .. at least I don't really know the details about these three people. The first 3 paragraphs of this post feel like a teaser/trailer for something bigger. Yet I don't know where to go to get "the scoop". You know I love that poem, however the first 3 paragraphs left me hanging. Help me. Maybe you can have an online project for all of your faithful blog followers.. and another project you intend to take to publishers. That or you have to let me read over your shoulder when you write about this Laura character because you hooked me in your post and now I want more ... (I am so glad you are writing for yourself again.) Love ya!
ReplyDeleteI like your idea for keeping followers aware of you current projects and also analyzing older works. Be aware if you describe works in progress in detail to me and it makes me want to read that piece, then I am left yearning to discover an outcome but we don't know when the outcome will be created let alone available to read. You've always wanted a critic and I will try my best even though I love everything you write! Keep it coming!
Good to hear that you are intrigued by the Laura piece! The things bubbling beneath the surface of Laura and Wren's "ordinary" lives - and their inescapable connection to Fred - is one of the main things I am working to explore. It's good to have a push to share some of what I have written on this. Stay tuned for next week's post :)
DeleteThanks for the support! xo